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Spare me the "U suxlolol" part. Constructive Criticism please. If you can't, stfu.

how about more actual movement and less free transform tool.

moar brush

Make moar frames and animate the whole fall of the victim and the other guy deal with the corpse falling at him...like catching it and drop it to the ground,or jump backwards

rakeria wrote:

Make moar frames and animate the whole fall of the victim and the other guy deal with the corpse falling at him...like catching it and drop it to the ground,or jump backwards

agreed

Also,try to make a knife wound stay on him for extra realism

not just a blood implosion

yea try adding a bit more blood....cause the blood came out as a little squirt. Yea its pretty realistic but this is stick animation so blood effect can be crazy.

the knife...I don't know for some reason it looks like a car key...again I know its realistic but try making it bigger and more detailed.

As Tonney said less trasformation tool and more actual movements.

The guy falls really weirdly when he's stabbed/cut/sliced...I don't know what...

make more..its good!

It's rather stiff and choppy. The movements need more easing and you need to improve on the physics as well.

The blood could be a lot better, like a squirt and splat. Show some stronger reaction to the victim. Make him move back due to the force before falling to the ground.

The starting part where the guy lands from the sky. Make him drop fast and then do a ease. Show some anticipation when he gets up and then do the slash.

Keep going!

rakeria wrote:

Also,try to make a knife wound stay on him for extra realism

not just a blood implosion

Realism? Sorry to make a point that might sound a bit rude, but are stick figures realistic(no offence btw)?

Thanks on everyone comments, I won't go through all of them but I appreciate your time and Ezspecially zackie's which shows some points which really need fixing (eg. the fall, I hadn't noticed it but it IS slow).

As for those who hate free transform, too bad, I think it's awesome.

Thanks.

Mail, He's not offended if you ask if stick figures are realistic. now if you'd ask if manga is realistic, though, He'd be crying his eyes out right now.

Tonney wrote:

Mail, He's not offended if you ask if stick figures are realistic. now if you'd ask if manga is realistic, though, He'd be crying his eyes out right now.

Manga eyes are too shit huge to cry out.

Too Much qtool. and there is to much frames on the falling part.

mailbawx wrote:

Tonney wrote:

Mail, He's not offended if you ask if stick figures are realistic. now if you'd ask if manga is realistic, though, He'd be crying his eyes out right now.

Manga eyes are too shit huge to cry out.

No,thats chibi/plushie n00b :D

That post is two months old. Don't repeat pointless bumping please.

I can't watch it. the swf doesn't load.

Beret wrote:

I can't watch it. the swf doesn't load.

It's four months old :/

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