Tests or Tryouts

Subject: Tests or Tryouts Sun Sep 13, 2009 2:11 am

Post all your Tests or animations you need ideas to complete with.

http://www.truploader.com/view/999972

I ran out of ideas there :P
And I'm rusty.
Ideas?

Subject: Re: Tests or Tryouts Sun Sep 13, 2009 2:39 am

1) DON'T MAKE THE PLAY BUTTON SO YOU HAVE TO CLICK ON THE TEXT!

2) WTF IS WRONG WITH THE CLOUDS? THEY JUST CHANGE!

3) THE CLOUDS SUCK!

4) THERE'S SHITTY GRADIENT ON THE RIGHT IN SOME SCENE, I'M NOT BOTHERING TO REMEMBER IT

5) WHAT WAS THE POINT OF IT?

7) YOU HAD FINGERS IN ONE SCENE, BUT YOU DIDN'T IN THE OTHER! THEY WERE BOTH REALLY CLOSE UP, WHY REMOVE THEM?

8) THE HAND MOVEMENT WAS WOBBLY WHEN HE WAS MOVING THE KNIFE DOWN

9) YOU SHOULD HAVE MADE IT MORE DRAMATIC WHEN HE TOOK THE KNIFE UP, REALLY GIVING THE IMPRESSION HE WOULD DO IT!

Subject: Re: Tests or Tryouts Sun Sep 13, 2009 2:42 am

Make him jump. Personally I like the clouds.

You Could Continue With:
- him jumping
- suicide right there
- a person coming up to ask if he's alright or something and then the main guy does a dramatic action

Subject: Re: Tests or Tryouts Sun Sep 13, 2009 2:43 am

Lol, I will work on all of that.
Fingers are hard :c

Thanks emp, will try that

Subject: Re: Tests or Tryouts Sun Sep 13, 2009 2:52 am

6) YOU MUST THANK ME FOR CRITICZSISZM

Subject: Re: Tests or Tryouts Sun Sep 13, 2009 2:59 am

Thank you so much Tonney <3

Subject: Re: Tests or Tryouts Sun Sep 13, 2009 10:44 pm

http://www.truploader.com/view/638948

A test :) CC plz

Subject: Re: Tests or Tryouts Mon Sep 14, 2009 1:20 am

The dust particles were sort of choppy, a bit good in the start but then they suddenly stop and disappear. It didn't seem to have much force, make the background move a little. The huge rectangle thing wasn't eased when it came up nor when it came down, it should have been like this (Fast FPS sorry). I'll help you out on MSN. Tests or Tryouts 494752

Subject: Re: Tests or Tryouts Wed Sep 16, 2009 9:40 am

Aklemo, is that supposed to be forcefully pushed out, and some how pulled in again? Or just jumping? If jumping, you've got it wrong.

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emp wrote:: Make him jump. Personally I like the clouds.

You Could Continue With:
- him jumping
- suicide right there
- a person coming up to ask if he's alright or something and then the main guy does a dramatic action

Or he gets snip'd. Much more fun and unexpected :D

Subject: Re: Tests or Tryouts Wed Sep 16, 2009 3:47 pm

If you want fun and unexpected, have aterrorist attack with exploding bananas, which's explosions are pink, and rainbow particles, while dying, he actually gets alive, as he was dead before dying. that kind of stuff.

Subject: Re: Tests or Tryouts Thu Sep 17, 2009 12:10 am

Tonney wrote:: Aklemo, is that supposed to be forcefully pushed out, and some how pulled in again? Or just jumping? If jumping, you've got it wrong.

Well, it's supposed to come up with force, and then back down with force... of gravity maybe I don't know. I think I've gotten a bit of rust on my part.

Tabion wrote:

emp wrote:: Make him jump. Personally I like the clouds.

You Could Continue With:
- him jumping
- suicide right there
- a person coming up to ask if he's alright or something and then the main guy does a dramatic action

Or he gets snip'd. Much more fun and unexpected :D

Would be fun but I really need to do at least ONE serious short.

Tonney wrote:: If you want fun and unexpected, have aterrorist attack
with exploding bananas, which's explosions are pink, and rainbow
particles, while dying, he actually gets alive, as he was dead before
dying. that kind of stuff.

Haha, it is funNY and unexpected