Begginers post your animations here

Post and get comments on how to improve them!

Lol. C&C please.

http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=248007

Edit: I can see that the ball is invisible for a second. Will rectify that.

Edit2: And thanks to AkLeMo for helping.

This quite good.

Thanks.^^

How about some negative criticism?

Well, there some kind of physics problem in there. Try watching some physics tutorials and you will definately improve on physics of stuff.

Thanks. I definitely will. ^^

I think that this is my best line combo
i still need to add the enemy, buuuut....

http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=438845

here's another one:

http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=184732

in the second there's no sound

i think their good, no?

Never add a face to a stickfigure unless it's an epic face.

Use onion skin, if you do, zoom in and draw carefully.
Also you don't need to redraw every frame, in line atleast, you can drag the limbs.
Combo was better. In the sword thing, it needs to be more than just one frame, more easing more particles etc..

Keep practicing, but I suggest you look at some nice animations, such as Shock for inspiration and how to do particles.

... ok, here's my third work... i hope you'll enjoy!

http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=109317

:D

AkLeMo wrote:

Also you don't need to redraw every frame,

YES YOU DO. OTHERWISE IT LOOKS NOOBISH, AND NOBODY WANTS THAT.


Wow, I can edit posts :>

brush - redraw, line - modify, if it's a big change, redraw.

Need smoothness. Practise more. Make sure the movements are fluid and not stiff. Watch more animations and compare them to yours. That should help

Tonney wrote:

brush - redraw, line - modify, if it's a big change, redraw.

When I animated with line I redrew every frame. ._."

wrong.

I modify my line, never like re-draw stuff. I can't seem to get the shape right

Tonney wrote:

wrong.

It worked fine for me. lolloolol


But since I hardly ever used line, I never really got into the groove.

Your improving greatly my friend,but try to change the FPS now,It will be harsh on you first but you will get gd at it and your anims will be much moar smoother

You post your anims too Rakeria, you're a beginner as well

AkLeMo wrote:

You post your anims too Rakeria, you're a beginner as well

True

Then post lol.

yea post nig

Ohlololol

http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=667175

Happy?

thy is improving, practice on movements more, like running etc..

AkLeMo wrote:

thy is improving, practice on movements more, like running etc..

yh lol,I never animate running naow,ends up in chicken jump >_>

More like a "chic" jump XD