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PostSubject: Mai SW   Mai SW I_icon_minitimeThu Dec 18, 2008 11:18 am

http://storywrite.com/Tabion

Read Mai Storees. NAO D:<
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PostSubject: Re: Mai SW   Mai SW I_icon_minitimeThu Dec 18, 2008 12:54 pm

Heya Nerd!

Took me about 15 minutes to think that. well, i didn't i just read a few sentences in a story you wrote in that place.. seriously though. get a hobby. : o. All that spare time is having a bad effect on you. I don't want to say anything offensive, but, seriously.. Get a life.. No offense.. But SERIOUSLY, that's.. idk.. mad. In a bad way.
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PostSubject: Re: Mai SW   Mai SW I_icon_minitimeThu Dec 18, 2008 1:11 pm

lolwtf?

Writing, gaming And Roleplaying Would Be my hobbies :P
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PostSubject: Re: Mai SW   Mai SW I_icon_minitimeThu Dec 18, 2008 9:53 pm

Really nice. Keep writing. :]
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PostSubject: Re: Mai SW   Mai SW I_icon_minitimeFri Dec 19, 2008 3:22 am

phatton.


i looked at the wolves of lore but i didn't read it because of the capital letters on EVERY DAMN WORD

its annoying.
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PostSubject: Re: Mai SW   Mai SW I_icon_minitimeSat Dec 20, 2008 5:30 am

That's How I Roll Cal.


DEAL WITH IT D:<

@Sarah: Thanks :)
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PostSubject: Re: Mai SW   Mai SW I_icon_minitimeSat Dec 20, 2008 5:49 am

srsly, get a hobby that actually makes you move more then your fingers.
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PostSubject: Re: Mai SW   Mai SW I_icon_minitimeSat Dec 20, 2008 7:45 am

That is a hobby. A very creative and thought provoking hobby.
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PostSubject: Re: Mai SW   Mai SW I_icon_minitimeSat Dec 20, 2008 9:48 am

Tonney wrote:
srsly, get a hobby that actually makes you move more then your fingers.
Writing is good hand-eye coordination.

But yeah work on your grammar, and try to avoid this,kind,of,comma,spacing And Don't Ever Capitalise Every First Letter Of Every Word Ok?
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PostSubject: Re: Mai SW   Mai SW I_icon_minitimeSat Dec 20, 2008 11:33 am

Yea, in terms of your writing punctional and grammatorially you seriously need to improve or assholes like Tonney will never leave you alone and cough all over you.

Tonney leave him alone, writing is a hobby and a damn good one. It's also a job that makes a lot of people very fcuking rich.

EDIT: And please, please, please use more punctuation and connectives! It's like a list with lots of full stops and a rare comma!!!
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PostSubject: Re: Mai SW   Mai SW I_icon_minitimeSat Dec 20, 2008 12:32 pm

Lol Ghost... It's Just My Way of Writing :/ Well I'm Working On A backstory for One of My RP Characters. (Using Open Office, thank god for the link Ghost :D) Expect it Sometime Later :P Maybe 2009
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PostSubject: Re: Mai SW   Mai SW I_icon_minitimeSat Dec 20, 2008 12:44 pm

Lol, hey no probs I is lord of linkehs :p

But in all honesty your style of writing ain't legal. People won't bother reading and no one would ever publish something written like that, unless it was a very important intentional part of the story, like "The Curious Incident of the Dog in the Night-time" or even at great lengths a diary, or an integral part of one part of the story, not the whole thing.
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PostSubject: Re: Mai SW   Mai SW I_icon_minitimeSat Dec 20, 2008 12:58 pm

Oh yes :3

I'll try get rid of the CAPS habit :/
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PostSubject: Re: Mai SW   Mai SW I_icon_minitimeSat Dec 20, 2008 2:09 pm

it looks like you dont need to try
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PostSubject: Re: Mai SW   Mai SW I_icon_minitimeSat Dec 20, 2008 2:35 pm

I was only doing it for that post :P . And i need it kinda, out of my system completely :/
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PostSubject: Re: Mai SW   Mai SW I_icon_minitimeSat Dec 20, 2008 3:59 pm

I wasn't being an asshole for that. the whole hobby. Srsly. Okay, I was trying to be semi-nonflaming back there, i don't know what that means, whatever, basically, seriously, ****ing hell, you're a nerd. get a life. Writing? ffs, okay. writing. i can understand writing. BUT WRITING AT 12? WHAT THE ****? GET A ****ing LIFE. sorry. they made me do it. also, that caps thing is irritating, BUT NOT AS ****ing BAD AS WRITING AT 12 OMGOMGOMG LIFE GET A LIFE GET A LIFE OMGGGGGGGGG.
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PostSubject: Re: Mai SW   Mai SW I_icon_minitimeSat Dec 20, 2008 11:04 pm

He already has a life. It's a good thing to write. A great thing at 12. It helps a lot. He could be an awesome writer some day because of the practice he got when he was 12. He could be really rich, he could be the author of a bestseller. He has got to improve his skills if he really is interested in it. This is a wonderful hobby and he should be encouraged. :]
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PostSubject: Re: Mai SW   Mai SW I_icon_minitimeSun Dec 21, 2008 1:27 am

Why does everything turn into a debate? lmao.

Nice stories :]
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PostSubject: Re: Mai SW   Mai SW I_icon_minitimeSun Dec 21, 2008 2:04 am

Tonney wrote:
I wasn't being an asshole for that. the whole hobby. Srsly. Okay, I was trying to be semi-nonflaming back there, i don't know what that means, whatever, basically, seriously, ****ing hell, you're a nerd. get a life. Writing? ffs, okay. writing. i can understand writing. BUT WRITING AT 12? WHAT THE ****? GET A ****ing LIFE. sorry. they made me do it. also, that caps thing is irritating, BUT NOT AS ****ing BAD AS WRITING AT 12 OMGOMGOMG LIFE GET A LIFE GET A LIFE OMGGGGGGGGG.
I'm 12 and I write, what's wrong with that? I still have a life; I play guitar, I draw comics, I animate.. I don't see why younger people should be called "a nerd with no life" because they do what they like doing. It's like saying "LOL YOU COOK?! LOL HE'S TRYING TO GET CHICKS LOL". Furthermore, you would have written when you were 12, so either you've just insulted yourself or you've never picked up a pen/pencil in your whole life.



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PostSubject: Re: Mai SW   Mai SW I_icon_minitimeSun Dec 21, 2008 3:25 am

Good thing? Yeah, His mind may be strong, But his body will be as fragile as a ****ing straw. That's an example. Practice? First, He should fix that ****ing Caps Habit Of Typing Like This, That's one thing, And second, Ever read those stories? They're.. I don't know. .Bad.. Also.. What does cooking have to do with chicks..? : o. I've written. Not stories. I am not insulting myself. And, Yeah, I used to be like that. In front of the comp 24/7. It resulted in me almost forgetting how to speak Estonian, Whenever someone talked to me in Estonian, i had to ask them to repeat slowly to understand. That's an example. I got fatter, My eyes started to hurt more, and i got weak. After i started going out again, It all got better. I'm back to normal now, And I'm not gonna make that mistake again, To pick a computer over a healthy social life. Seriously. Those were the dark days of my life. I regret that. Don't make that mistake. Grab a friend and go out. right now. And to the younger people being nerds thing, I don't know why, But.. that's the time of having all the fun, All the stupid things you're supposed to do when 11-13 and such, all of that, I missed all of them, Thanks to the computer, I regret it all. I would much rather have been doing ANYTHING except sitting in front of the computer, i.. Actually, **** that, I'm going to stop talking, I need a smoke. brb.

Edit: When saying computer, Replace that with any indoor hobby.
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PostSubject: Re: Mai SW   Mai SW I_icon_minitimeSun Dec 21, 2008 3:40 am

they werent that dark tonneyyyyyyy

ill never forget
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PostSubject: Re: Mai SW   Mai SW I_icon_minitimeSun Dec 21, 2008 6:45 am

Lol. Atleast SOME people appreciate my writing.
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PostSubject: Re: Mai SW   Mai SW I_icon_minitimeSun Dec 21, 2008 7:50 am

It doesn't mean that just because he likes to write, he doesn't have a social life. He can do both.
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PostSubject: Re: Mai SW   Mai SW I_icon_minitimeSun Dec 21, 2008 8:35 am

Sarah wrote:
It doesn't mean that just because he likes to write, he doesn't have a social life. He can do both.

Exactly.
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PostSubject: Re: Mai SW   Mai SW I_icon_minitimeSun Dec 21, 2008 1:47 pm

I somehow refuse to believe that after reading a bit of that story..
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